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alucard12

Post subject: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:19 am

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This is my first sprite, that I have been working on for a couple of hours. I seriously need some C&C. Tell me what I am lacking!!!! PLEASE! lol :lol:

This Is The Base

This Is An Example

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Anarchy

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:56 am

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They look funny, but I like them. Armor needs some help though

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alucard12

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:04 am

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LOL, Thanks! Yeah The Armor was really a 8 minute job, but I am going to fix it up later.

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Mithlomion

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:42 pm

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scary shit

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alucard12

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:21 pm

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Mithlomion wrote:

scary shit

LOL! That hurt my pride!!!! :lol:

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I wish they had Imgzoom on this forum so you can see what I did, but on my base sprite I shaded around the face and connected the neck to the body, and on my example I made the helm more darker and full and I also mess with the sword.

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Jacob

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:32 pm

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Looks like a UFO.

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Matt

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:40 pm

Looks like Rayman.

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alucard12

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:41 pm

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LOL! and I wasn't even going for the rayman style, but It came out that way.

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Andrew

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:45 pm

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the faces scare me

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Tony

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:51 pm

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Looks constipated.

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alucard12

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:54 pm

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Looks diffrent.
(Thought I should keep the train going)

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Tony

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:55 pm

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alucard12 wrote:

Looks diffrent.
(Thought I should keep the train going)

I thought you should improve it..

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Matt

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:07 pm

He's trying.

If that's how he likes it though, then why change what he wants?

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alucard12

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:24 pm

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Matt wrote:

He's trying.

If that's how he likes it though, then why change what he wants?

Thank you Matt. This is the style that I wanted to use for my game, but I just wanted to know some tips to make it better. All I got from most of you guys were negative comments with no tips for improvements.

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Tony

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:35 pm

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alucard12 wrote:

Matt wrote:

He's trying.

If that's how he likes it though, then why change what he wants?

Tip 1 then, remove the pink color from his face. That's obviously how he looks constipated.

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Labmonkey

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:36 pm

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I have no idea if this might help, but maybe moves there hands up a bit, so they don't look so awkward. I know that is where they should go if you had arms, but you don't and so its hard to piece in what the hands are attached too.

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alucard12

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:41 pm

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Well, the pink part was supposed to be a sign of the sprite blushing,but I will remove it and see if it works out.
Okay I was kind of stuck on the hands part. Thanks for the tip.

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Tony

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:20 am

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alucard12 wrote:

Well, the pink part was supposed to be a sign of the sprite blushing,but I will remove it and see if it works out.
Okay I was kind of stuck on the hands part. Thanks for the tip.

Do an anime stlye blush

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Matt

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:23 am

Don't. Anime is for fags.

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Stomach Pulser

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:32 am

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fags?

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redhipo

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 11:49 pm

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Matt wrote:

Don't. Anime is for fags.

dam you are like the nices person in the forums im not trying to sound sarcastic

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Tony

Post subject: Re: My First Character Template

Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:07 am

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redhipo wrote:

Matt wrote:

Don't. Anime is for fags.

dam you are like the nices person in the forums im not trying to sound sarcastic

Yes, he is..

/sarcasm]

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wanai

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Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2021 9:14 pm

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wanai

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