Mirage Source

Rate please . And tell me how to make it better ^^. I know the bush looks bad.




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Nice, the shading on the leaves is awesome, mine never look that good

Not much i can say for you to improve it, the shadow of the tree kinda cuts off, and i dont particularly like the top swirl of the stump, (just doesnt fit in). but thats being really picky

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I suggest making the "stump" a bit more stumpy, you know, shorter.

Yea your right .. Ill remake it a bit so it looks better ^^.

Yep, a stumpier stump is in order here, other then that looking fantastic

Thanks everyone,. added a new pic.. Ofcourse there will be more tree types to make it look less... booring?

the way that naked guy is walking reminds me of the bigfoot video i saw on national geographic channel a few weeks ago.

the tiles look good though, although the ground ones kind of remind me of the old warcraft 2 tiles.

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Very nice lol ^ bigfoot :S xD

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I actually dont like it that much, the sprite look like a giant baby, and the trees looks like they are taken from 2000 years before christ.

Althought the shading has been done nice.

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Made this.. Doesnt look as good now doesnt it?

No the bottom is huge needs more stump, maybe it would be good in a overgrown forest ^^

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Well kinda.. I want an unique nature feel to the game.. Like wild, not normal... ^^.. Something special and different. And overgrown is what im looking for in forest

If that is the case then it works very well the shading is amazing ^^

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I like it all. And stumps don't have to be stumpy, and trees dont need massive trunks. I see plenty of large stumps and massive trees with the tiniest of stumps. I like the graphics, very origional yet realistic

9.5/10

Added an awesome new pic.. .. With new tree types..

The grey tree looks like its barly standing on its own maybe some roots?

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Most of the tiles look awesome. Just one thing bugs me. The dirt tile. I can easily see the repeating pattern in it. It kind of sticks out in the 2 screens.

I dont have anything wrong with the tiles, keep it coming dude.. It looks awesome..

Who is the artist?

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That taller tree, I suggest blending the top with the bottom a bit better, it just looks like an explosion of leaves at the top. Lol.

And I agree with the dirt tiles, they could be better, seeing as how the trees look.

And the sprite, looks like he's squating. O_o

That's all I have to say about it.

Fixed the dirt.. And ill fix the jumbo tree.. Anyway what do you mean Squaring? XD

@William : Vans did the sprites, i did the tiles ^^

Squating, you know, like when you use the bathroom.

I love it! That dirt tile is a bit annoying, I agree, I think it's that right edge.. or might be the left :p

Fixed that allready ^^

Allright People another pic ^^.. If your lazy and dont feel like going to page 1..

And yea, i know water edges look strange.. Grim allready told me that. anyway im fixing that now

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